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posted by [identity profile] dbassassin.livejournal.com at 05:43am on 09/01/2011
Glad to hear things were somewhat helpful and involved fewer brickbats than you were expecting. :)

Twenty does sound like an awful lot of people to get feedback from. I definitely second trying to get more in-depth feedback from a few of the more helpful (and articulate) people.

And yes, feedback on tone is hard to communicate without actually re-writing the story, because it's not a matter of changing a word here and there, but changing the flavour of the writing entirely.
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posted by [identity profile] drusillas-rain.livejournal.com at 11:12pm on 17/01/2011
late reply is late

Twenty people is not the norm. But at least I got a variety of opinions :)
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